Dear Sir,
I will graduate from the University of Kansas with a Masters deGREe in June of this year. My major is Pharmacy and I am very interested in securing a position before I graduate, if possible.
I am a Chinese and my bachelor's deGREe is from Zhejiang University.
I have long been hopeful of working for you after I graduate, BECause I consider you the finest hospital in this region, I as sure that if I have the privilege of serving in your pharmacy, I will greatly increase my education and my experience.
Needless to say, I will have completed a standard course in pharmacy before I graduate in June. In addition, I have chosen to elect all the courses available at my school in Hospital Pharmacy. I did this BECause I have always wanted to be a hospital pharmacy. My professors, Sr. John Harkin, Dr. Mildred Carter, and Dr. Iriny Schultz have give me permission to use their names as reference.
If you have a position available after I graduate, I would appreciate it. If not, please keep my name on your file, because I consider your Pharmacy the best in this region.
Sincerely yours,
拓展閱讀:英文求職信語(yǔ)氣
為了使英語(yǔ)信明了、簡(jiǎn)潔、準(zhǔn)確和禮貌,應(yīng)該注意如下幾點(diǎn):
A、 陳述自己的工作能力要實(shí)事求是,不要夸夸其談,過分渲染自己。如果高淡闊論夸大自己的優(yōu)點(diǎn),就會(huì)給讀信人留下一種虛浮不踏實(shí)的感覺。應(yīng)如實(shí)介紹自己的情況,讓對(duì)方去判斷你的能力。
B、 說明離職原因時(shí)切勿批評(píng)目前的工作單位或負(fù)責(zé)人。如果你對(duì)目前的工作單位或負(fù)責(zé)人說三道四大發(fā)牢騷,就會(huì)讓讀信人認(rèn)為你是個(gè)愛說長(zhǎng)道短搬弄是非之人。試想,有誰(shuí)會(huì)愿意把一個(gè)愛發(fā)牢騷而搬弄是非的人招聘到自己的單位來呢?
C、 自卑自貶亦不可取。如果自己都看不起自己,別人還能看得起你嗎?殊不知,招聘單位對(duì)你的估計(jì)是根據(jù)你對(duì)自己的估計(jì)做出的,因此,故作謙卑也只能是恰得其反。
D、 語(yǔ)氣須肯定而自信,要有創(chuàng)意,應(yīng)避免迂腐、生僻的詞。
現(xiàn)在讓我們來比較一下下面的三個(gè)句子在語(yǔ)氣上有何不同:
A、 I am not only competent to install a filing system that will fulfill the needs of your corporation, but also well qualified to operate it efficiently.(我自信不僅可以設(shè)置一套能滿足貴公司需求的檔案分類系統(tǒng),而且可以有效地進(jìn)行操作。) 在此名中使用了not only…but also,competent 和well qualified 等詞語(yǔ),表現(xiàn)得太自信,有夜郎自大之嫌,故不可取。
B、I think that I should probably make a good accountant for your factory.(我想我可能成為貴廠的一名好會(huì)計(jì)員)。 此名中的情態(tài)動(dòng)詞should和副詞probably 所表達(dá)的語(yǔ)氣都欠肯定,而make(成為)一詞也缺乏自信,整句話顯得語(yǔ)氣太弱,有自卑感,因此亦不可取。
C、I am confident that my experience and references will show you that I can fulfill the particular requirements of your secretarial position (我相信我的經(jīng)驗(yàn)和證明人可以向您表明,我能夠符合貴單位秘書一職的特定需要。) 此句中的confident 一詞語(yǔ)氣肯定,給人一種自信感,而will show 和I can 也無自大之嫌,因而此句用得恰到好處,有特殊風(fēng)格。