12月3日的雅思大作文考的是政府投資類話題,下面是小編為大家整理收集的關(guān)于2016年12月3日雅思真題大作文范文的相關(guān)內(nèi)容,歡迎大家的閱讀。
Task:Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
思路解析:
本年12月首次考試的作文題目是關(guān)于為頂級運(yùn)動員建專門的訓(xùn)練設(shè)施,讓他們在國際賽場爭金奪銀,這樣做是好還是壞?本題是2014年7月10日原題重現(xiàn)。唐老師在本專欄上期曾提醒大家多注意練習(xí)2014年和2013年的寫作真題,沒想到再次一語成讖。不過,即使沒練過,這個題目寫起來也還是相當(dāng)容易的。在解析本題之前,順便說一句,關(guān)于體育設(shè)施,還有一個比較常見的問法是:在一個新城市中,是多建體育設(shè)施好,還是建購物中心好?
那么,為頂級運(yùn)動員專門建訓(xùn)練設(shè)施,讓他們在國際賽場上成功,這個做法好不好呢?如果從肯定的角度,我們可以認(rèn)為,運(yùn)動員獲得冠軍,最直接的好處就是讓他們收獲獎金,從而改變他們的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況。這點是常識,但很多烤鴨可能都想不到,因為我們中國烤鴨一看到冠軍,立馬想到的是升國旗,奏國歌,其他的好像什么都想不起了。這就是中國烤鴨的思維問題所在:因為是用漢語思維,就不可避免地帶上漢語思維的特征,同時因為都是成年人了,漢語思維還往往比較抽象,但問題是多數(shù)烤鴨的英語水平不夠好,用英語來表達(dá)漢語想的那些復(fù)雜思想還不能做到游刃有余,于是就霸王硬上弓,結(jié)果就弄出來很多漢語式英語,順帶還有很多語法錯誤,最糟糕的情況就是把雅思考官弄得一臉蒙逼,他就只好給你個低分了。那么,怎么辦呢?藥方就是讓這類考生主動裝傻,或者扮嫩,給自己的思維降降等級。雅思6分作文的思維水平,只要達(dá)到我們小學(xué)3、4年級即可,不需要去討論那些高深層次的內(nèi)容,因為你的英語表達(dá)水平達(dá)不到。各位烤鴨回去看看,你小學(xué)3、4年級的漢語作文寫的什么,你在雅思考場上就用英語寫什么就夠了!
好,運(yùn)動員得冠軍,除了改善運(yùn)動員的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況外,還有別的什么好處呢?那我們就稍微想遠(yuǎn)一點,這些運(yùn)動員是不是可以成為孩子們的英雄(role model),從而激發(fā)他們?nèi)⒓舆\(yùn)動呢?最后再想多點,這些運(yùn)動員得冠軍,是不是可以激發(fā)整個國家的自豪感(national pride)呢?好,總結(jié)起來,國家給頂級運(yùn)動員建訓(xùn)練設(shè)施讓他們得冠軍,就有三個好處:(1)改善他們自己的經(jīng)濟(jì)狀況;(2)成為孩子們學(xué)習(xí)的對象;(3)激發(fā)國家自豪感。這三點都不抽象,而且層層推進(jìn),從個人到他人,最后到國家,層次感有了,邏輯也有了。雅思寫作思維就是這么簡單,就是這么有樂趣!(特別提示:如果你寫不了國家自豪感這個層次,寫前兩點也足夠。寫作的核心標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是寫正確沒有,寫明白沒有,而不是一定要寫到哪幾個點!那是國內(nèi)政治課老師的毛病!)
然而,如果只考慮頂級運(yùn)動員得冠軍的好處,卻不考慮大眾體育設(shè)施的建設(shè),這無疑又是極端了。如果一個國家大多數(shù)群眾沒有地方鍛煉身體,你得再多的國際冠軍也是然并卵。你的錢有了,role model 也有了,國家自豪感也有了,可是當(dāng)你豪情萬丈地出門準(zhǔn)備鍛煉身體,卻發(fā)現(xiàn)舉目四望無處可去,你不回家罵娘才怪!因此,結(jié)論很簡單:政府需要給頂級運(yùn)動員建特殊訓(xùn)練設(shè)施,但更需要給普通民眾提供體育鍛煉設(shè)施,但是如果政府預(yù)算有限,不能兩者兼顧時,我寧愿政府先投資大眾體育設(shè)施,因此只有建立在大眾體育基礎(chǔ)上的冠軍才能真正成為大眾的role model,才能真正給我們帶來國家自豪感!
Sample answer:
Some countries today invest huge amount of money on specialized facilities for the training of their top athletes to achieve sporting success internationally. I think this investment is rewarding as long as it is not at the expenses of the sports facilities for the public.
The benefits of athletes winning on international sports arena such as Olympic Games or the World Cup Championship are multiple. For the athletes, who often come from economically underprivileged families, a champion can save them from their financial embarrassment, not just for themselves, but for the entire families as well. An Olympic champion, furthermore, can become a national hero and serve as the role model for numerous young people, who will try to be as hard-working, self-disciplined, and persistent as the champion. Most importantly, a hard-won champion title can even bring pride to the entire nation and help the nation to move on, especially in hard times.
However, more international champions should not become the excuse to cut down on the investment on the public sports facilities. A country without adequate sports facilities for the general public can never be truly encouraged no matter how many world champions it boasts. You will understand the frustration when you put on your sports shirt and go out, spurred by the perfect performance of an athlete you love in an important game, only to find that all available gyms and stadiums are crowded, leaving you nowhere to go.
To conclude, international sporting success is necessary, which explains why a country ought to put money into specialized facilities to train its top athletes. However, if the government has to make a choice between the world champions and the public sports facilities, I will support the second one. To my mind, only when the general mass of people enjoy the adequate sports facilities will they be encouraged and motivated by their world champions.
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