大家都知道，要想要去澳大利亞留學(xué)，不僅需要符合澳洲大學(xué)語言成績要求，留學(xué)文書也是必不可少的一環(huán)，下面小編就為大家介紹一下澳洲留學(xué)申請寫作3條注意事項(xiàng)，供大家參考。
1.澳大利亞大學(xué)的錄取方式和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)與咱們國內(nèi)有很大不同
國內(nèi)升學(xué)，從小學(xué)、初中、高中到大學(xué)、研究生、博士，每上一個(gè)臺階都要經(jīng)過相關(guān)部門的嚴(yán)格考試。所謂“千軍萬馬過獨(dú)木橋”，說的就是這種情況。反觀澳大利亞大學(xué)，并沒有入學(xué)考試，因此申請文件就顯得格外重要。它們往往是澳大利亞大學(xué)教授了解你學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷、性格品質(zhì)、工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)和專業(yè)水平的惟一媒介和手段。
2.在吸引教授眼球和爭取錄取上，申請材料的優(yōu)劣與各種考試成績同等重要
許多申請人花費(fèi)大量的時(shí)間和金錢來準(zhǔn)備各種考試，以為拿到高分就萬事大吉了，其實(shí)不然。理想的托福、雅思成績只不過是對你語言運(yùn)用能力的一種體現(xiàn)，能在申請材料中起到錦上添花的作用，但它不能反映出一個(gè)人的專業(yè)素質(zhì)和才干，而這些恰恰正是教授急于了解的。
3.一份漂亮的申請材料能夠充分展示你的優(yōu)勢
體現(xiàn)你的成就、抱負(fù)和個(gè)人品德，能夠彌補(bǔ)你大學(xué)成績、工作經(jīng)驗(yàn)甚至是學(xué)歷的不足，令你在眾多申請者中脫穎而出，盡快拿到通知書，大大加快留學(xué)進(jìn)程。
申請書范文：
To live a meaningful life everyday; to continually pursue my predetermined worthwhile goals. -My view of life.
Could I put myself in the life-threatening working environment? Could I sacrifice my life for the benefits of others? Some people may laugh at my crazy question. To me, that is a serious question I have come a long way to find my answer. “I am not sure whether it is worth to answer”; “What is the true meaning of that question?”
When I was a young child, I watched a soap opera that was about court. I was deeply impressed by the judge’s calmness and the lawyer’s eloquence and resource that were showed in this opera. From then on, I hoped to study law some day. Fortunately, I performed well in entrance examination and got enrolled into xx University. Then I chose law as my major without hesitation. At university, I studied hard and got GPA 3.4. What’s more, I broadly read all kinds of books, including philosophy, history etc. My teachers’ instruction strengthened my understanding of law and makes me understand the significance of law to a country. From my studies, I had a lot of fun and got more interested in law. Moreover, I actively participated in practice in holidays from common company to law firm and tried to apply the theory I had learned into practice.
This summer, I had my internship in counselor department in xxx Group Co Ltd which was involved in a business contract dispute, which was submitted to China International Economic and Trade Arbitration Commission for arbitration. As a representative of the requested applicant, I took part in the evidence collection in the early arbitration stage and clearly explained why the 5% balance of goods was not paid on time. After knowing the whole case, I visited my teacher, an Arbitration Law professor, and listened to her opinions. Realizing the counterpart didn’t completely implement their contract duty, I gave reasons as follows: First, the counterpart company didn’t mention bearing issue, which caused that the delivered machines couldn’t be put into the plant because of the disqualification of workshop. Thus overhaul was necessary, which delayed production and resulted loss. Based on these reasons, the counterpart didn’t completely carry out its duty, so our party did not pay the balance on time. During this time, I found out the evidence and pictures that attested counterpart did not give reasonable suggestion and service, and made a statement in the court. Finally, the arbitration turned out that counterpart compensated our loss, in which the arbiters invoked the reasons that I stated. They had a panel made up of 3 lawyers and 5 company representatives as agents while we just had 3 persons—two lawyers and me. Under such condition, I was able to cooperate with them and clearly stated my opinions without any nervousness, which got their respect. This matter greatly inspired my enthusiasm on study.
In addition, I took part in the contact draft in several companies. In the process, when I met a lot of problems, I often turned to my teachers for help, which made good impression on them. As I cherished each practice, I studied my specialty and English hard. With effective study method and diligence, I did well both in English and law, which helped me a lot to get scholarship every year. On the other hand, my practice inspired me to study. In practice, I exercised my legal knowledge. I also realize the big gap between theory and its application—sometimes I have master the rules but I didn’t know how to use it in actual case. My practice experiences have not only strengthened what I learned but have supplied new knowledge for me, which is good for my future study and career.
In my study and practice, I admired outstanding lawyers’ eloquence and jumping thinking more and more. However, in China, most of lawyers come from theory study and those who can perform well in practice are insufficient. Moreover, after the China’s entrance to WTO, there are a lot of problems with Chinese law. I think, my internship experience is not enough. In practice, I could combine substantive law with procedural law to analyze case, but I still feel my theoretical foundation is not solid enough. What’s more, comparably speaking, the chances that I have to initiatively study and practice are not a lot. Thereby, I am eager to study further abroad to know more about foreign law, thoughts and lawyer career so that I am able to stand out in fierce competition.